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It's an interesting picture, and I dread using this word, but I'm given no alternative. It's cute. Very much, and possibly insanely, so. I feel like I'm betraying my country to the squirrels by saying that.
Moving on - it seems to me like the girls are being dwarfed by the couch they're sitting on. Is that a humongous sofa, or are those two girls just short? Due to the relative sizes and how baggy their clothes (especially the girl to the right) look, one of the things that keeps coming to mind when I look at this picture is, "are they shrinking?" Given the people we both know in common, that isn't too odd an impression to get. Last note of criticism - next to the size relation to the sofa, what's throwing me off a lot is the size of their heads - a person typically varies between 6 and 8 heads tall, and they both look to be well over ten heads tall. In future pictures, I'd suggest enlarging the heads a little bit.
I'll get to commenting on more of your other pictures when I get some free time. Keep up the good work and keep trying.
Best/Dan
It's hard to keep track of proportions when somebody keeps on yapping about God knows what it means...
Except for the couch. I meant for it to be huge. It warps the image you get and makes them look smaller, as you indeed mentioned, and thusly cuter.
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"Every time you start talking to me, I go to my Happy Place."
-Mataichi
*Starts training his cats with Cyber-dolls: Plaaaay, shreeed, maaaim...*
-Mortalion
Best/Dan
Ironically, I just measured a bit, and the girls are only 7 head-lengths...
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"Every time you start talking to me, I go to my Happy Place."
-Mataichi
*Starts training his cats with Cyber-dolls: Plaaaay, shreeed, maaaim...*
-Mortalion
*Measures them in MS Paint* ... huh. So it would seem. The head seems a lot smaller than it actually is, for some reason.
Best/Dan
^^
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"Every time you start talking to me, I go to my Happy Place."
-Mataichi
*Starts training his cats with Cyber-dolls: Plaaaay, shreeed, maaaim...*
-Mortalion
Best/Dan
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"Every time you start talking to me, I go to my Happy Place."
-Mataichi
*Starts training his cats with Cyber-dolls: Plaaaay, shreeed, maaaim...*
-Mortalion
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"Don't be afraid of the dark, be afraid of what it hides." ~Unknown
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Anime sucks.